Monday, March 16, 2009

Closeness

Closeness is not defined by physical proximity
But rather a dance between souls
Of complex and complementary strokes,
A body of intimacy
If formed by a presence completing an essence.
Bodies of mind unfold by the touch of fingertips
From conversations
as profound as the brush of quivering lips…

A precious bond between two entities
Is created by a synergy of energies
Sometimes found between sweaty palms clasped, hand in hand;
Enclosed in the words of letters between long distance lovers;
In the comfort of a child’s head laying in rest upon their mother’s breast;
Even in the electric signals of phone calls and online messages between friends.


Closeness.

Thanx Philip 4 d inspiration! :-)))

6 comments:

Ugandan girl said...

"Enclosed in the words of letters between long distance lovers;
In the comfort of a child’s head laying in rest upon their mother’s breast;
Even in the electric signals of phone calls and online messages between friends."

My defination exactly of closeness...Whose Philip..(am nosy i know)

Ugandan girl said...

socks...i claim

philo-so-far said...

Cough!cough!..hehemmm!
hey btw who is phillip? lucky bastard
i like the piece,really personal and deep..
seems u and this philip guy have a strong bond.."the kind that is with long distance lovers",who cant be moved by the many hills and valleys between them...
thats something special and u shouldnt let it die
btw do u like him?

eizzy.k said...

@ UG Girl - yeeeah! Glad u feel me girl. Philip is just friend, he inspired this cuz the 1st two lines are actully a rephrased quote from him...

@ Philo - I told u not 2 read too deep into it! well me and this Philip dude, we are close as in friends close, not lovers close! ...although i do know there is that romantic tone to it, but i'm a romantist at heart, i guess it comes out in my work sometimes....

Robyn said...

your word play amazes me more and more each day.
this is a good peace.

Sarah said...

thankyou soo much for the comment, it means a lot!

i LOVE your blog. seriously, im adding this to my list of: "distractions from homework" :)

keep up the writing!

peace